Saturday, May 5, 2012

Evaluation 1

In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media prodcuts? (i.e. of film openings)

The title of our film is first shown when Jody spells it out using the building blocks we made. However, it is not fully clear that is the title until it is displayed at the end. This way of introducing the title into the actual footage is unusual and would go against typical conventions of a thriller as they would usually just edit the title in during the opening on a black background.

However, in the case of the font style of the thriller, our title does follow traditional codes and conventions in terms of font style. It is quite simple but also quite a quirky, spooky font which suits the genre. For example; in the film Black Swan, the title shot is plain black words on a white background, which is very similar to what we have done, however we decided to switch the colours around as it seemed darker and more fitting for our thriller.

In terms of settings and locations we had main locations while filming. We had a red room, which was Megan's Dad's study. This was our main location as this is where we witness the change that Jody goes through, turning from inncocent to evil. We would say that this goes with codes and conventions of a thriller because alot of films use colours to symbolise danger and/or isolation. This screenshot also introduces the character Jody. It shows her happily playing with her teddy and some building bricks. She is introduced straight away while the opening credits are being shown.

We also used Megan's Dad's car to film to flashback car crash scene. This goes partly with and party against conventions of a thriller because although flashbacks are used often in films, car scenes at the camera angles we used are not common.

This screenshot shows the majority of props we used as well as the costume. Here you can see a teddy, the building bricks, a photo frame, her white dress, and her hair and brusing make-up. We would say that this goes with conventions of a thriller as films often use props to symbolise things and make-up for effect. In our case, the teddy, white dress and hair in bunches shows her innocence, contrasting against the red background which represents danger.

In terms of the story, the main shot that sets what the film is about comes right at the end of the opening. It goes with traditional conventions of a thriller because extreme close ups are often used to show the expression of the characters. Red contact lenses or make-up/props are often used there abouts.

Genre wise, we have followed conventions of a thriller by having a scene with fake blood. This shows that it is a thriller. Lots of thrillers include fake blood and we used it in the car crash scene along with make-up to show that Jody had died.

Lastly, our best piece of editing was the photoframe shot. We used an aerial shot to look down on the photoframe as though we were seeing it through Jody's eyes. We used green card to make a green screen and edited in a Mum (Ms Thompson), a Dad (Mr Shearing) and Jody to make a family portrait type picture. We then made Jody fade from the picture as she died, like she never even existed. This, although is rare to see depending on the story of the thriller, has been done before in thrillers and therefore would follow typical conventions of a thriller. However, we were pleased with how it looked and thought the idea was clever. It shows a key moment in the opening as it makes the audience realise that she has died and makes the audience feel sorry for her and wonder what she will do next.

Friday, May 4, 2012

Audience Feedback


Once we were finished filming and the final touches were made to the thriller we put it straight on our YouTube account. We could then access it easily to show people and ask what they thought. As the public are the people who will go and see the film it is their opinion that will matter the most to us. 
Reviews: 
We recorded some responses, but as a few of these were feedback from links that we sent out or asked people to watch we were unable to record everyone, so the main quotes are used in the presentation, with recorded responses of some people on our YouTube account. 
                                         Peers/Friends:

As the age certificate is a 15 we wanted to ask people aged between 16-18 about what was good and what could be improved in our thriller. Here are the main quotes from what people said along with their age.
“ The eyes at the end are scary after the slow singing built up the moment, but the car crash scene could be more realistic.” (16)
“I enjoyed the bit when the teddy rolls off face down, like she left the child life behind, but there could be more voices at the beginning” (17)
                                               Family:
 Although they are not our main target audience, we wanted to show our parents/family the thriller and get their feedback on it.  

“The music with the sudden sounds makes it very jumpy and builds the suspense, but there could have been more blood in the car crash scene” (40)
“I liked how the songs were in slow motion and the voices over-lapping, but the car crash could have been slower” (51) 
                                          Teachers/Staff: 

As we were around school a lot we asked our teachers to watch the thriller and give us some feedback, we made sure we asked different genders.
“I thought the plot was good and left me with questions” (26)

“I love the bit where she disappears from the photo, that’s really creepy, the technical bits are really good! What could be better is having more close shots of the girls face to show the make up” (34)
                                            Feedback:


Overall, the feedback that we got was good and we completely agree with the points raised. If we were to do it again we would take these points in to consideration and adapt our thriller to make it better and scarier.    


Here are some video responses to our thriller:



Monday, April 30, 2012

Twitter Page

We have created a Twitter page for 'Solemn Thriller'. As social networking is becoming increaingly popular and more and more people are turning to them, we thought that this was another good way to advertise. Many films are advertised on Twitter, and with the world wide reach that it had it enables us to get as big an audience as possible.
We try to keep posting as regularly as we can, using our mobile phones as well to keep up to date. 

We wanted to keep posting to keep the audience and followers up to date. We posted links off YouTube and Facebook on the twitter page to get people to view out other types of media pages.

   


Facebook Page

We created a Facebook page for 'Solemn Thriller'. With over 250 million people connected on Facebook worldwide, it creates a huge market base, where many other businesses can promote, and offer deals, products, and services.
It is good for promoting out thriller as we can reach lots of people, but also target the audience that we have previously assembled. Facebook attracted people of a very wide age range, so to get the most out of promoting our thriller on Facebook, we could make sure the colours, quotes and reviews are aimed at the target audience and easy to see. We wouldn't want to advertise among other competitors or sectors that have nothing to do with our genre or age range, so therefore we would be segmented in with the same groups and competitors as ours.
We started our Facebook page with the original logo.


We are keeping the Facebook page up to date, with pictures. 


We are also adding statuses that will keep the audience updated on what we are doing, for the timeline. If it was a real film being released in cinema, the Facebook page would be good promotion as they can keep posting when the film will be in cinema's, so people will remember. To have a less formal approach, the film pages often put backstage pictures and videos on them as they will make the audience more anticipated to see the film, as they are getting hints of it through the build up. Promotion for a film is one of the most important stages that requires a lot of effort to keep up and keep the public aware of the film.  

Public Choosing Best Slogan

As a group we were undecided on which slogan to go with, so we decided the simplest way to choose one was ask people. the choices for them to choose were:
1) "little girls are sweet, so is revenge"
2) "innocence is masked by sweet revenge"
3) "innocence is captured, revenge is released"
4) "innocence leaves and evil takes over"

These are the results we got:
1) 12
2) 3
3) 8
4) 2

These results are quite reliable, as we asked a variety of age groups and genders. Some comments people made included:
"Number 3 is quite sinister and evil, and has a more serious tone"
"Number 1 is good as it mentions the character in the plot."

Overall, the chosen slogan (1) will be featured on out poster, and promotion visuals. 

Sunday, April 29, 2012

Slogan Ideas

For our poster, we've decided to use a slogan as we think this would be a good way of advertising. We want to create a slogan that will stick in people's mind, raise quesions and make them want to see the film. Here are a couple of ideas we had:


We thought of 'Life isn't as pretty as it seems' as it relates to the little girl not being so cute and pretty anymore however we felt this had a slight comedic side to it and didn't suit the film genre well. This also applied to another idea of ours 'Life isn't always a ring a roses' which we came up with as the nursery rhyme 'Ring A Roses' will be in the background of our thriller.
We liked using the word 'life' in the slogan as we thought it related to the film well because the little girl loses her life during the car crash.
We also liked using the word 'innocence' because the girl loses her innocence when she becomes possessed. For example 'Little girls aren't as innocent as they seem' was one of our ideas however we felt that this wasn't very original and had probably been used before.
Other ideas that we had that arnt shown on the image were "little girls are sweet, so is revenge" and also "innocence lost". Both of these were good, the first one mentions that the character is a young girl, which reperesents innocence itself, where as the second one says the word, however wer thing it is too short and wouldnt mean much to the audience.
we also thaught of "innocence is captured, revenge is released"- this was good as it had rhythem to it, and could be easily remember by the audience, ewhich is what a slogen should do.   
There was also "innocence leaves and evil takes over", we didnt like this one as much as we thaught it was too blunt and didnt leave as many questions as previous ideas.  
We will ask the public which one they like best, so it isnt just our opinion and we can get different veiws on it.

Poster

Here is the final poster for our thriller 'Solemn'. We have included the title of the film. credits, a slogan and the BBFC rating of 15. We decided to use a forest setting to show that she was isolated and completely alone. We liked to use the building blocks in the scene as it is relevant to the young age of the girl and it stood out well against the background. We also put the BBFC rating and credits on to make it look more realistic like a real poster.