Once we were finished filming and the final touches were made to the thriller we put it straight on our YouTube account. We could then access it easily to show people and ask what they thought. As the public are the people who will go and see the film it is their opinion that will matter the most to us.
Reviews:
We recorded some responses, but as a few of these were feedback from links that we sent out or asked people to watch we were unable to record everyone, so the main quotes are used in the presentation, with recorded responses of some people on our YouTube account.
Peers/Friends:
As the age certificate is a 15 we wanted to ask people aged between 16-18 about what was good and what could be improved in our thriller. Here are the main quotes from what people said along with their age.
“ The eyes at the end are scary after the slow singing built up the moment, but the car crash scene could be more realistic.” (16)
“I enjoyed the bit when the teddy rolls off face down, like she left the child life behind, but there could be more voices at the beginning” (17)
Family:
Although they are not our main target audience, we wanted to show our parents/family the thriller and get their feedback on it.
“The music with the sudden sounds makes it very jumpy and builds the suspense, but there could have been more blood in the car crash scene” (40)
“I liked how the songs were in slow motion and the voices over-lapping, but the car crash could have been slower” (51)
Teachers/Staff:
As we were around school a lot we asked our teachers to watch the thriller and give us some feedback, we made sure we asked different genders.
“I thought the plot was good and left me with questions” (26)
“I love the bit where she disappears from the photo, that’s really creepy, the technical bits are really good! What could be better is having more close shots of the girls face to show the make up” (34)
Feedback:
Overall, the feedback that we got was good and we completely agree with the points raised. If we were to do it again we would take these points in to consideration and adapt our thriller to make it better and scarier.
Here are some video responses to our thriller:
Here are some video responses to our thriller:
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